This was done for a friend, and turned out not bad. There is a cuteness within the drawing that I think is present but not completely shining through. The whole thing turned out a little too anthropomorphic. I would like to do a second pass and maybe even paint it. I am not a fan of the redundancy of the word honey being on the jar/bucket I will definitely be removing that and just trying harder in general to really try and get the cute thing across.
Wednesday, July 29, 2009
The honiest of bee's
This was done for a friend, and turned out not bad. There is a cuteness within the drawing that I think is present but not completely shining through. The whole thing turned out a little too anthropomorphic. I would like to do a second pass and maybe even paint it. I am not a fan of the redundancy of the word honey being on the jar/bucket I will definitely be removing that and just trying harder in general to really try and get the cute thing across.
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Hey buddy, I think some of the cuteness is lost in the face bee-cause (get it?) there are a lot of sharp corners in there, her cheeks, the back of the head and the top lip are full of sharp edges. I think if you soften her face up a bit, especially the lips, you'll get closer to what you want. I like this tho, I think it'd be cute to off set the nose a bit too, or maybe not so flat a shape, have it coming off her face a bit...well just imo. Looking good tho, should look great with some color...and bigger bewbies.
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